I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teachers are whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome work Sofia. I enjoyed watching your video from the reading task explaining which sports you think should be in the Olympics. I thought you had some great reasons behind your choices.
I really like the look of your new character for a Mario game. It almost looks kind of cute even though it is a villain. I bet it would be hard facing a villain who can turn invisible and shoots lightning at you!
I also enjoyed reading the poem you wrote this week. I don't know a lot about Minecraft but I felt like I learnt a bit more about Wither's just from reading your poem.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Awesome work Sofia.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your video from the reading task explaining which sports you think should be in the Olympics. I thought you had some great reasons behind your choices.
I really like the look of your new character for a Mario game. It almost looks kind of cute even though it is a villain. I bet it would be hard facing a villain who can turn invisible and shoots lightning at you!
I also enjoyed reading the poem you wrote this week. I don't know a lot about Minecraft but I felt like I learnt a bit more about Wither's just from reading your poem.