I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teachers are whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sofia. I really like how you have set out your slides and your toothbrush you designed for the Elephants. Also that banana split is looking very appetising and delicious. Great job!
Nice work Sofia, I really like how you have set you slides to look unique. I enjoyed seeing your maths thinking for the questions you selected to answer.
For your STEAM challenge, I like how you thought of animals being impacted by people throwing rubbish in the environment. I think it would be a great idea to have a type of packaging which is safe for animals to eat.
Next time for your recipe instructions, make sure you set out the method more clearly, e.g. step 1, step 2 step 3...
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Hi Sofia. I really like how you have set out your slides and your toothbrush you designed for the Elephants. Also that banana split is looking very appetising and delicious. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice work Sofia, I really like how you have set you slides to look unique. I enjoyed seeing your maths thinking for the questions you selected to answer.
ReplyDeleteFor your STEAM challenge, I like how you thought of animals being impacted by people throwing rubbish in the environment. I think it would be a great idea to have a type of packaging which is safe for animals to eat.
Next time for your recipe instructions, make sure you set out the method more clearly, e.g. step 1, step 2 step 3...