I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teachers are whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Sofia. I like the DLO's you made this week, and you have completed them to a high standard. I enjoyed your piece of writing for this week, and I can see you have used multiple text features. The subheadings you have used has made your writing very easy to follow, and the diagram link also helped to understand the information you included.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work this week Sofia. I like the DLO's you made this week, and you have completed them to a high standard. I enjoyed your piece of writing for this week, and I can see you have used multiple text features. The subheadings you have used has made your writing very easy to follow, and the diagram link also helped to understand the information you included.
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