I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teachers are whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Sofia, nice work this week! I really like how you have changed the theme of your slideshow and made it unique.
You did a great job showing your working out for your chosen math questions, maybe next time you could attempt to answer some more questions.
I really like the look of the mini beast you have created, and thought it was great that you combined a few native New Zealand birds together. Your piece of writing for this weeks was written well. I like how your character was trying to prove to everyone that Kuitails were real. I also thought it was creative to include a mini documentary about them as a part of your story. That was a great way to add it some description about the bird.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Sofia, nice work this week! I really like how you have changed the theme of your slideshow and made it unique.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job showing your working out for your chosen math questions, maybe next time you could attempt to answer some more questions.
I really like the look of the mini beast you have created, and thought it was great that you combined a few native New Zealand birds together. Your piece of writing for this weeks was written well. I like how your character was trying to prove to everyone that Kuitails were real. I also thought it was creative to include a mini documentary about them as a part of your story. That was a great way to add it some description about the bird.