I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teachers are whaea Tamzin and Whaea Sharlee. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Sofia. I can tell you have a good understanding of the differences between 1st and 3rd person point of view in a narrative by the way you answered questions. I also like how you included you plan for your writing so we know what ideas you had.
I am just wondering where your slide with the texts you read this week are? Remember we want to see which texts you picked to read this week.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work this week Sofia. I can tell you have a good understanding of the differences between 1st and 3rd person point of view in a narrative by the way you answered questions. I also like how you included you plan for your writing so we know what ideas you had.
ReplyDeleteI am just wondering where your slide with the texts you read this week are? Remember we want to see which texts you picked to read this week.